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Re: [jose] Nit: Inconsistent terms between JWS and cookbook drafts

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Wed, 29 October 2014 22:59 UTC

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From: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
To: Ludwig Seitz <ludwig@sics.se>, "jose@ietf.org" <jose@ietf.org>
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Thanks for the observation, Ludwig.  Matt, I'd suggest changing the section heading at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-jose-cookbook-05#section-4.5 from "Detached Signature" to "Signature over Detached Content" and changing the first sentence of that section from "This example illustrates a detached signature" to "This example illustrates a signature over Detached Content".

				-- Mike

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From: jose [mailto:jose-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Ludwig Seitz
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Subject: [jose] Nit: Inconsistent terms between JWS and cookbook drafts

Just a minor nit:

The JWS draft talks about "Detached Content" in Appendix F, while the cookbook calls the same thing "Detached Signature" in section 4.5.


/Ludwig


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