Re: [Json] REMINDER - WGLC Ends 2013-10-11

["John Levine" <[e-mail]>]

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This draft is ready to publish.  I have a few editorial comments,
none of which I think would be contentious.

Section 1.2 says:

   Object; thus, for example, "Hello world!", "42", and "true" would all
   be valid JSON texts in the ECMAScript 5.1 context.

My guess is that the quotes are intended to be part of "Hello world!"
but not part of 42 or true.  Dunno how to fix that other than perhaps
to display them, e.g.

   Object; thus, for example, these would all
   be valid JSON texts in the ECMAScript 5.1 context:

	"Hello world!"
	42
	true

Please move section 1.4, the list of changes, to the end.  I think
that most people will be more interested in the JSON spec rather
than the minutiae of what's changed.

Section 9 has some upper case MAY and some lower case.  It should
probably be consistent one way or the other.  I realize this is
currently unchanged from 4627.

In section 11, the Published specification should be this document,
not RFC 4627.  Since this is standards track, shouldn't the change
controller now be the IETF?

R's,
John
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