[Justfont] Early AD review of the document

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Fri, 12 August 2016 20:30 UTC

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Hi,
A few minor comments on the latest draft:

TrueType, CFF, SVG need informative references on first mention.

Should existing registrations under application/ be mentioned as deprecated aliases?

rfc6838 needs to be referenced normatively the first type media types are mentioned (in the Introduction section).

Best Regards,
Alexey