Re: [KEYPROV] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063 (2999)

Magnus Nystrom <mnystrom@microsoft.com> Sun, 13 November 2011 18:06 UTC

From: Magnus Nystrom <mnystrom@microsoft.com>
To: Sean Turner <turners@ieca.com>, "andrea.doherty@rsa.com" <andrea.doherty@rsa.com>, "mpei@verisign.com" <mpei@verisign.com>, "smachani@diversinet.com" <smachani@diversinet.com>
Thread-Topic: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063 (2999)
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Date: Sun, 13 Nov 2011 18:06:24 +0000
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Subject: Re: [KEYPROV] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063 (2999)
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Gareth appears to be correct; the text in 4.2.4 should probably also be amended to state something like:
"The AD element MUST be sent unless it was already sent in the KeyProvClientHello message."

-- Magnus


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sean Turner [mailto:turners@ieca.com]
> Sent: Saturday, November 12, 2011 6:14 PM
> To: andrea.doherty@rsa.com; mpei@verisign.com; smachani@diversinet.com;
> Magnus Nystrom
> Cc: stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie; phill@hallambaker.com;
> Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net; gareth.richards@rsa.com; keyprov@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063 (2999)
> 
> Trying to clear up the errata.  Should I approve this?
> 
> spt
> 
> On 10/18/11 12:39 AM, RFC Errata System wrote:
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6063, "Dynamic
> > Symmetric Key Provisioning Protocol (DSKPP)".
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6063&eid=2999
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Editorial
> > Reported by: Gareth Richards<gareth.richards@rsa.com>
> >
> > Section: 4.2.4
> >
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> >             DSKPP Client                         DSKPP Server
> >
> >             ------------                         ------------
> >
> >             E(K,R_C), AD          --->
> >
> >
> >
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> >             DSKPP Client                         DSKPP Server
> >
> >             ------------                         ------------
> >
> >             E(K,R_C), [AD]          --->
> >
> >
> >
> > Notes
> > -----
> > The AD is carried in the<KeyProvClientHello>  if sent as a result of a trigger and
> so is optional in the<ekyProvClientNonce>.
> >
> > Instructions:
> > -------------
> > This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected.
> > When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) can log in to
> > change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> >
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC6063 (draft-ietf-keyprov-dskpp-14)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : Dynamic Symmetric Key Provisioning Protocol (DSKPP)
> > Publication Date    : December 2010
> > Author(s)           : A. Doherty, M. Pei, S. Machani, M. Nystrom
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Provisioning of Symmetric Keys
> > Area                : Security
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
> >

[KEYPROV] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063 (29… RFC Errata System
Re: [KEYPROV] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063… Sean Turner
Re: [KEYPROV] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063… Sean Turner
Re: [KEYPROV] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6063… Magnus Nystrom