Re: [kitten] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility-05: (with COMMENT)
Robbie Harwood <rharwood@redhat.com> Wed, 06 March 2019 21:06 UTC
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From: Robbie Harwood <rharwood@redhat.com>
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Subject: Re: [kitten] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility-05: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell writes: > Hi, thanks for this work. I only have a couple of editorial comments: > > - Abstract and Introduction: Please expand PKINIT on first mention in both the > abstract and body. > > §4: "... implementations conforming to this specification can OPTIONALLY send > back a list of supported CMS types ..." > > OPTIONALLY is not a defined keywords. I suggest changing "... can OPTIONALLY > ..." to "MAY" Plural disagreement between "implementations" and "a list". Hi Ben, thanks for taking a look! Greg was kind enough to push a new version (-06) to the datatracker that hopefully addresses your concerns. Thanks, --Robbie
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