Re: [kitten] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth-07

Robbie Harwood <rharwood@redhat.com> Wed, 10 June 2020 18:17 UTC

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To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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Subject: Re: [kitten] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth-07
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Robbie Harwood <rharwood@redhat.com> writes:

> Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> writes:
>> On May 28, 2020, at 6:27 PM, Robbie Harwood <rharwood@redhat.com> wrote:
>>> Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> writes:
>>> 
>>>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
>>>> Review result: Almost Ready
>>>> 
>>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>>>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by
>>>> the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like
>>>> any other last call comments.
>>>>
>>>> Minor Concerns:
>>>> 
>>>> Abstract: Please explain "FAST", perhaps just a pointer to RFC 6113.
>>> 
>>> We believe this is covered by the "Document conventions" section.
>>
>> In my opinion, something needs to be in the Abstract.  Otherwise, the
>> Abstract is not stand alone.
>
> That makes sense.  If I change
>
>     Second, enable the use of second factor authentication without
>     relying on FAST.
>
> to
>
>     Second, enable the use of second factor authentication without the
>     need for a separately-established secure channel (FAST).
>
> would that address your concerns?  I'd also be open to leaving out the
> parenthetical mention of FAST entirely if you think that's more clear.

I've opted to make this change, removing explicit mention of FAST
entirely.  It is part of -09.

Thanks,
--Robbie