[kitten] resend: [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility-04

Scott Bradner <sobradner@gmail.com> Fri, 22 February 2019 14:26 UTC

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Subject: [kitten] resend: [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility-04
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I am resending this because the review tool seems to have failed to properly distribute it

Scott

> Begin forwarded message:
> 
> From: Scott Bradner <sob@sobco.com>
> Subject: [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility-04
> Date: February 17, 2019 at 3:21:29 PM EST
> To: <ops-dir@ietf.org>
> Cc: kitten@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility.all@ietf.org
> 
> Reviewer: Scott Bradner
> Review result: Has Nits
> 
> This is an OPS-DIR review of PKINIT Algorithm Agility
> (draft-ietf-kitten-pkinit-alg-agility).  This ID updates PKINIT following the
> guidelines in BCP 201 to make it algorithm agile and to expose acceptable
> algorithms.
> 
> This is a very well written clear document.  I do not find any operational
> issues with the document except that the document could use a section on
> interoperability (old server-new client, new server-old client).
> 
> There are a few words about the topic deep in section 6 about the supportedKDFs
> field but I do not see a general discussion or a discussion about the kdf
> field. The text about the supportedKDFs field could be moved to a new section
> and each of the old/new combinations could be addressed.  I see this as an
> operational issue because compatibility issues are a frequent source of
> operational headaches.
> 
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