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Re: [kitten] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth-07

Robbie Harwood <rharwood@redhat.com> Thu, 28 May 2020 22:27 UTC

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From: Robbie Harwood <rharwood@redhat.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, gen-art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [kitten] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-kitten-krb-spake-preauth-07
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Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> writes:

> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Almost Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by
> the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like
> any other last call comments.

Hi Russ, thanks for the review.  Changes should be present in -08 unless
discussed further below.

> Major Concerns:
>
> Does this align with draft-irtf-cfrg-spake2?

It's derived from it, though they no longer totally align.

> Are you aware of https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/4018/?

I have seen it, but as Watson Ladd put it in
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/cfrg/senXefqczpUZo26B35ekz8d3iLo/

    I’m not a patent lawyer, and cannot speculate on any IPR conflicts
    that may or may not exist.

> Minor Concerns:
>
> Abstract: Please explain "FAST", perhaps just a pointer to RFC 6113.

We believe this is covered by the "Document conventions" section.

Thanks,
--Robbie

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