Re: [kitten] WGLC for three "bis" documents: draft-ietf-kitten-rfc4402bis-00, draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-01, draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-00

Bill Mills <wmills_92105@yahoo.com> Thu, 05 February 2015 14:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [kitten] WGLC for three "bis" documents: draft-ietf-kitten-rfc4402bis-00, draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-01, draft-ietf-kitten-rfc6112bis-00
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The standalone tool can product results that the more aggressive parser in the submission checked won't accept.  I use that for local work but always submite the XML to the online tool for final production of the plaintext draft. 

     On Wednesday, February 4, 2015 9:35 PM, Weijun Wang <weijun.wang@oracle.com>; wrote:
   

 

On 2/5/2015 13:14, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
> On Mon, 2 Feb 2015, Weijun Wang wrote:
>
>> But the xml2rfc tool claims
>>
>>    No boilerplate text available for ipr: 'full2026'.  Acceptable values are:
>> trust200902, noModificationTrust200902, noDerivativesTrust200902,
>> pre5378Trust200902, trust200811, noModificationTrust200811,
>> noDerivativesTrust200811
>
> The standalone tool for local use, or http://xml2rfc.ietf.org/ ?  I think
> that at least at one point, they had slightly different behavior.

Local, but the web tool also shows the same error. In fact, there is a 
box on the web page explaining several ipr values (4 flavors of 
trust200902) and "pre5378Trust200902" seems to be the correct one since 
the initial RFC for JGSS-API (RFC 2478) was submitted in June 2000.

>
>> I decide to choose "pre5378Trust200902". The output text is almost identical
>> to that of RFC 5653, but adding these lines which I think is harmless
>>
>>        Code Components extracted from this document must
>>    include Simplified BSD License text as described in Section 4.e of
>>    the Trust Legal Provisions and are provided without warranty as
>>    described in the Simplified BSD License.
>
> That may be good enough; we can call out the difference in the shepherd
> report and/or RFC Editor note if needed.

I am waiting for feedback from Greg, and after that I'll post -02 draft.

Thanks
Weijun

>
> -Ben
>

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