Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)
Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Thu, 19 May 2022 18:56 UTC
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Subject: Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)
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Possibly the ADs didn't see this proposed resolution. Possibly the RPC can handle this editorial Errata report. Adrian -----Original Message----- From: L2sm <l2sm-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Qin Wu Sent: 06 October 2021 07:34 To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Cc: xiechf.bri@chinatelecom.cn; giuseppe.fioccola@tim.it; l2sm@ietf.org; luay.jalil@verizon.com; bin_wen@comcast.com; mohamed.boucadair@orange.com Subject: Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703) I agree this errata report should be accepted. -Qin -----邮件原件----- 发件人: L2sm [mailto:l2sm-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 RFC Errata System 发送时间: 2021年10月5日 15:39 收件人: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org 抄送: l2sm@ietf.org; giuseppe.fioccola@tim.it; xiechf.bri@chinatelecom.cn; luay.jalil@verizon.com; bin_wen@comcast.com; mohamed.boucadair@orange.com 主题: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703) The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery". -------------------------------------- You may review the report below and at: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6703 -------------------------------------- Type: Editorial Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Section: 8 Original Text ------------- leaf pbs { type uint64; units "bps"; description "Peak Burst Size. It is measured in bytes per second."; } Corrected Text -------------- leaf pbs { type uint64; units "Bytes per Second"; description "Peak Burst Size."; } Notes ----- There is a mismatch between the units statement and the description text. The corrected text assumes that the description reflects the intent. This is the meaning assumed in draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm Instructions: ------------- This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. -------------------------------------- RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10) -------------------------------------- Title : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery Publication Date : October 2018 Author(s) : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil Category : PROPOSED STANDARD Source : L2VPN Service Model Area : Operations and Management Stream : IETF Verifying Party : IESG _______________________________________________ L2sm mailing list L2sm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/l2sm _______________________________________________ L2sm mailing list L2sm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/l2sm
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- Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6… Rob Wilton (rwilton)