[L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Tue, 05 October 2021 07:38 UTC

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Date: Tue, 05 Oct 2021 00:38:33 -0700
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Subject: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8466,
"A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6703

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>

Section: 8

Original Text
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leaf pbs {
type uint64;
units "bps";
description
"Peak Burst Size. It is measured in bytes per
second.";
}

Corrected Text
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leaf pbs {
type uint64;
units "Bytes per Second";
description
"Peak Burst Size.";
}

Notes
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There is a mismatch between the units statement and the description text.

The corrected text assumes that the description reflects the intent. This is the meaning assumed in draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm

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RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10)
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Title : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery
Publication Date : October 2018
Author(s) : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil
Category : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source : L2VPN Service Model
Area : Operations and Management
Stream : IETF
Verifying Party : IESG

[L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703) RFC Errata System
Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6… Qin Wu
Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6… Adrian Farrel
Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6… Rob Wilton (rwilton)