Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)

"Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com> Thu, 19 May 2022 19:02 UTC

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From: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton@cisco.com>
To: "adrian@olddog.co.uk" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>, 'Qin Wu' <bill.wu@huawei.com>, 'RFC Errata System' <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "l2sm-ads@ietf.org" <l2sm-ads@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)
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This is modifying a YANG module, it should be "Hold for Doc Update", since a new version of a YANG module requires a new revision + revision date statement, and hence it cannot be fixed by an errata.

Thanks,
Rob


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
> Sent: 19 May 2022 11:56
> To: 'Qin Wu' <bill.wu@huawei.com>; 'RFC Errata System' <rfc-editor@rfc-
> editor.org>; l2sm-ads@ietf.org
> Cc: xiechf.bri@chinatelecom.cn; giuseppe.fioccola@tim.it; l2sm@ietf.org;
> luay.jalil@verizon.com; bin_wen@comcast.com;
> mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
> Subject: RE: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)
> 
> Possibly the ADs didn't see this proposed resolution.
> Possibly the RPC can handle this editorial Errata report.
> 
> Adrian
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: L2sm <l2sm-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Qin Wu
> Sent: 06 October 2021 07:34
> To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
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> luay.jalil@verizon.com; bin_wen@comcast.com;
> mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
> Subject: Re: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)
> 
> I agree this errata report should be accepted.
> 
> -Qin
> -----邮件原件-----
> 发件人: L2sm [mailto:l2sm-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 RFC Errata System
> 发送时间: 2021年10月5日 15:39
> 收件人: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
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> luay.jalil@verizon.com; bin_wen@comcast.com;
> mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
> 主题: [L2sm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8466 (6703)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8466, "A YANG Data
> Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6703
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Mohamed Boucadair <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
> 
> Section: 8
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>                   leaf pbs {
>                     type uint64;
>                     units "bps";
>                     description
>                       "Peak Burst Size.  It is measured in bytes per
>                        second.";
>                   }
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>                   leaf pbs {
>                     type uint64;
>                     units "Bytes per Second";
>                     description
>                       "Peak Burst Size.";
>                   }
> 
> Notes
> -----
> There is a mismatch between the units statement and the description text.
> 
> The corrected text assumes that the description reflects the intent. This is
> the meaning assumed in draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm
> 
> Instructions:
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network
> (L2VPN) Service Delivery
> Publication Date    : October 2018
> Author(s)           : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : L2VPN Service Model
> Area                : Operations and Management
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
> 
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