[L2sm] Ben Campbell's No Objection on charter-ietf-l2sm-00-06: (with COMMENT)

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 03 November 2016 02:25 UTC

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Subject: [L2sm] Ben Campbell's No Objection on charter-ietf-l2sm-00-06: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-l2sm-00-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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A strictly editorial comment:

The second sentence in the third paragraph would benefit from being
broken into a few shorter sentences.