Re: [L2sm] Ben Campbell's No Objection on charter-ietf-l2sm-00-06: (with COMMENT)

["Ben Campbell" <[e-mail]>]

On 3 Nov 2016, at 6:22, Benoit Claise wrote:

> On 11/3/2016 3:25 AM, Ben Campbell wrote:
>> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
>> charter-ietf-l2sm-00-06: No Objection
>>
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>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/charter-ietf-l2sm/
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>> COMMENT:
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>> A strictly editorial comment:
>>
>> The second sentence in the third paragraph would benefit from being
>> broken into a few shorter sentences.
> You're right.
> New text, proposed by Adrian:
>
> The working group will derive a single data model that includes 
> support for the following:
>
> - point-to-point Virtual Private Wire Services (VPWS),
>
> - multipoint Virtual Private LAN services (VPLS) that use LDP-signaled 
> Pseudowires
>
> - multipoint Virtual Private LAN services (VPLS) that use a Border 
> Gateway Protocol
>
> (BGP) control plane as described in RFC4761 and RFC6624
>
> - Ethernet VPNs specified in RFC 7432

That's much better, thanks!