[L2sm] R: Fwd: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08.txt

Fioccola Giuseppe <giuseppe.fioccola@telecomitalia.it> Thu, 22 February 2018 15:20 UTC

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From: Fioccola Giuseppe <giuseppe.fioccola@telecomitalia.it>
To: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>, "l2sm@ietf.org" <l2sm@ietf.org>
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Ok, we will take note of this change in view of the next revision.
Thank you,

Giuseppe

Da: L2sm [mailto:l2sm-bounces@ietf.org] Per conto di Benoit Claise
Inviato: giovedì 22 febbraio 2018 13:37
A: l2sm@ietf.org
Oggetto: [L2sm] Fwd: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08.txt

Thank you for the new version.
A minor editorial point in section 1.2.
For consistency with other YANG module drafts, please remove:

   A simplified graphical representation of the data model is presented

   in Section 5<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08#section-5>-5>.



   The meaning of the symbols in these diagrams is as follows:



   o  Brackets "[" and "]" enclose list keys.



   o  Curly braces "{" and "}" contain names of optional features that

      make the corresponding node conditional.



   o  Abbreviations before data node names: "rw" means configuration

      (read-write), and "ro" state data (read-only).



   o  Symbols after data node names: "?" means an optional node and "*"

      denotes a "list" or "leaf-list".



   o  Parentheses enclose choice and case nodes, and case nodes are also

      marked with a colon (":").



   o  Ellipsis ("...") stands for contents of subtrees that are not

      shown.
No need to post a new draft version for now, just keep this change in your temp version.

Regards, Benoit


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A new version (-08) has been submitted for draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model:

https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08.txt





The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model/



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https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08



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