[L2sm] Fwd: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08.txt

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Thu, 22 February 2018 12:36 UTC

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Subject: [L2sm] Fwd: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08.txt
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Thank you for the new version.
A minor editorial point in section 1.2.
For consistency with other YANG module drafts, please remove:

        A simplified graphical representation of the data model is presented
        inSection 5
    <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08#section-5>.

        The meaning of the symbols in these diagrams is as follows:

        o  Brackets "[" and "]" enclose list keys.

        o  Curly braces "{" and "}" contain names of optional features that
           make the corresponding node conditional.

        o  Abbreviations before data node names: "rw" means configuration
           (read-write), and "ro" state data (read-only).

        o  Symbols after data node names: "?" means an optional node and "*"
           denotes a "list" or "leaf-list".

        o  Parentheses enclose choice and case nodes, and case nodes are also
           marked with a colon (":").

        o  Ellipsis ("...") stands for contents of subtrees that are not
           shown.

No need to post a new draft version for now, just keep this change in 
your temp version.

Regards, Benoit


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Subject: 	New Version Notification - 
draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08.txt
Date: 	Thu, 22 Feb 2018 02:19:47 -0800
From: 	internet-drafts@ietf.org
To: 	bclaise@cisco.com, Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>



A new version (-08) has been submitted for draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08.txt


The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model/

Diff from previous version:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-08

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