Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-05.txt

Zhuangshunwan <zhuangshunwan@huawei.com> Fri, 28 February 2014 08:31 UTC

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Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-05.txt
Date: Fri, 28 Feb 2014 16:30:56 +0800
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Dear Authors,
I have a minor question, see inline.

8.4.1.1.1 Auto-Derivation from the Ethernet Tag ID

   The following is the procedure for deriving the RT attribute
   automatically from the Ethernet Tag ID associated with the
   advertisement:

        +    The Global Administrator field of the RT MUST
             be set to the Autonomous System (AS) number that the PE
             belongs to.

Vincent:  Here Global Administrator field contains a 2 octets long number,
but the Autonomous System (AS) number could be 4 octets, how to handle such
case?

        +    The Local Administrator field of the RT contains a 4
             octets long number that encodes the Ethernet Tag-ID. If the
             Ethernet Tag-ID is a two octet VLAN ID then it MUST be
             encoded in the lower two octets of the Local Administrator 
             field and the higher two octets MUST be set to zero.


Regards,
Vincent

-----邮件原件-----
发件人: L2vpn [mailto:l2vpn-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Ali Sajassi (sajassi)
发送时间: 2014年2月14日 9:07
收件人: Jakob Heitz; l2vpn@ietf.org
主题: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-05.txt


Hi Jakob,

The reason the diff looks large is because some of the sections have been
reshuffled. Here are the main changes to this rev:

1. Modified section 5 to have a generalized format for ESI w/ additional
ESI types

2. Clarified the advertisement of Ethernet A-D per ES route when the
number of associated RTs is more than the limit to be advertised with a
single route. In such case, instead of a single Ethernet A-D per ES route,
a set of such routes is advertised
 
3. Added a 2nd MPLS label to the MAC route. This label is optional

4. Added text to security section

5. Added text to IANA section

Cheers,
Ali





On 2/13/14 4:30 PM, "Jakob Heitz" <jakob.heitz@ericsson.com> wrote:

>The diff is large, but much seems to be language rewrites and
>clarification.
>Could the authors please submit a list of substantive changes.
>
>Thanks,
>Jakob.
>
>-----Original Message-----
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>Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-05.txt
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>
>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Layer 2 Virtual Private Networks
>Working Group of the IETF.
>
>        Title           : BGP MPLS Based Ethernet VPN
>        Authors         : Ali Sajassi
>                          Rahul Aggarwal
>                          Wim Henderickx
>                          Aldrin Isaac
>                          James Uttaro
>	Filename        : draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-05.txt
>	Pages           : 49
>	Date            : 2014-02-13
>
>Abstract:
>   This document describes procedures for BGP MPLS based Ethernet VPNs
>   (EVPN).
>
>
>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn/
>
>There's also a htmlized version available at:
>http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-05
>
>A diff from the previous version is available at:
>http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-l2vpn-evpn-05
>
>
>Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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>
>Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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