[L3sm] Proposed changes to draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis

Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com> Tue, 05 December 2017 03:19 UTC

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From: Qin Wu <bill.wu@huawei.com>
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Hi, All:

Two revisions to address IESG second telechat's comments:

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-10

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-wu-l3sm-rfc8049bis-11
The changes include:

1.       A few Editorial changes to Section 1, second paragraph and Section 9.

2.       Add two new subsection in section 1.4 to clarify Implementation Issues with RFC 8049

And also assess impact.

-Qin