Re: [Lager] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (6105)

Asmus Freytag <asmus@unicode.org> Tue, 14 April 2020 19:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lager] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (6105)
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On 4/14/2020 5:48 AM, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7940,
> "Representing Label Generation Rulesets Using XML".
>
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> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6105
>
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> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Michael Bauland <michael.bauland@knipp.de>
>
> Section: 7.2.1.
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> A label "yy" would have the variants "xy", "yx", and "xx".  Because the variant mapping from "y" to "x" is of type "allocatable" and a mapping from "y" to "y" is not defined, the labels "xy" and "yx" trigger the "any-variant" condition on the third label.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> A label "yy" would have the variants "xy", "yx", and "xx".  Because the variant mapping from "y" to "x" is of type "allocatable" and a mapping from "y" to "y" is not defined, the labels "xy" and "yx" trigger the "any-variant" condition on the third action.
>
> Notes
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> The "third label" at the end of the sentence makes no sense in this context, instead it should read that the condition of the "third action" is triggered.
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This should be verified.

A./

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> RFC7940 (draft-ietf-lager-specification-13)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Representing Label Generation Rulesets Using XML
> Publication Date    : August 2016
> Author(s)           : K. Davies, A. Freytag
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Label Generation Rules
> Area                : Applications and Real-Time
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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