[Lake] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-18

Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 20 December 2022 19:47 UTC

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Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review result: Almost Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-18
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2022-12-20
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is well written, and easy to read. I do have one minor
issue that I would like the authors to address.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:

Q1: The document talks about the Initiator and Responder roles, what messages
they send etc. But I can't find a definition of what the roles. I assume the
Initiator initiates something, but unless I have missed it it would be good to
have a few word of role definitions.

Nits/editorial comments: N/A