[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bcp-03

Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 03 October 2022 22:18 UTC

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Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Issues

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bcp-03
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2022-10-03
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This draft is supposed to provide a comprehensive guideline and list of all the
RFCs for people interested in deploying DNSSEC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Section 1.2 (Implementing DNSSEC) states that some of the DNSSEC-related RFCs
have significant errata.

Is it possible to have a link to list those errata? so that people can easily
access them.

I am not an expert in DNSSEC. It has been overwhelming going through so many
RFCs for different aspects of the DNSSEC. It will be nicer if someone can write
a deployment guideline in addition to this draft of listing all the RFCs. Thank
you very much Linda Dunbar