[Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-08

Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 26 October 2022 16:12 UTC

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Subject: [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-08

Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. I also did a Gen-ART
review of the previous version of this document.  Please treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.


Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-08
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2022-10-26
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-24
IESG Telechat date: 2022-12-01


Summary: Ready

Major Concerns: None

Minor Concerns: None

Nits:

Section 3.1: s/IKE; however IKE_INIT/IKE; however, IKE_INIT/


Note:
   
I did not review the Appendix.

All of the comments from the Gen-ART review were addressed.  Thanks.

[Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf… Russ Housley via Datatracker