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Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 25 May 2023 06:27 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Thu, 25 May 2023 09:27:16 +0300
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01
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Robert, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Apr 27, 2023, at 23:09, Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-rfc8919bis-01
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2023-04-27
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-03
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> Ready for publication as a proposed standard rfc but with nits to consider
> before publication.
> 
> Nits:
> 1) It would be nice to explain when/how the registries got renamed?
> 
> 2) Please reconsider the link to the mailarchive in the RFC. Put it in the
> shepherd writeup or in the history in the datatracker as a comment (chairs can
> do this). Otherwise it adds to the list of URLs that we have to keep alive
> forever.
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