[Last-Call] Gen-art last call review of draft-moskowitz-ipsecme-ipseckey-eddsa-06

Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> Mon, 28 November 2022 17:41 UTC

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Subject: [Last-Call] Gen-art last call review of draft-moskowitz-ipsecme-ipseckey-eddsa-06
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Document:draft-moskowitz-ipsecme-ipseckey-eddsa-06
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2022-11-28
IETF LC End Date:2022-12-12
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: Ready with nits. It will be nice to explain why these IANA
Registry additions for EdDSA Public Keys to the IPSECKEY not done with RFC
8080 which defined it in Feb. 2017.

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
None

Nits/editorial comments:
Appendix A
please add an IPv6 example. RFC 4025 does have some.