Re: [Last-Call] [lamps] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect-03
Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Wed, 26 August 2020 16:26 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [lamps] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lamps-cms-update-alg-id-protect-03
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Peter: > Nits/editorial comments: > > Page 2, section 1, 2nd paragraph, last sentence: change "associate" to > "associated". Done. > Page 4, 1st NEW block, 4th sentence: insert "the" before "signedAttrs field". Fixed. > Page 5, section 3.5, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert "the" before "same > digest". Done. > Page 5, section 4 title: change "Recommend" to "Recommended" for parallel > construction with the section 3 title. Okay, done. > Page 6, ADD block: delete the first "known". Based on another comment, I have reworded this to say: While there are no known algorithm substitution attacks today, the inclusion of the algorithm identifiers used by the originator as a signed attribute or an authenticated attribute makes such an attack significantly more difficult. > Page 6, section 6, 3rd paragraph, 5th sentence: change "signalling" to > "signaling". Done. Thanks for the careful review. Russ
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