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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Radhakrishna Valiveti <rvaliveti@infinera.com>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>
CC: "ccamp@ietf.org" <ccamp@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-otn-b100g-applicability.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-otn-b100g-applicability.all@ietf.org>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>
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Thanks for the figure updates.  Any thoughts from the authors on splitting out the potential future work into its own section?  I think it would add clarity but perhaps not enough to justify the work.

Joe

On 9/29/22, 12:42, "Radhakrishna Valiveti" <rvaliveti@infinera.com> wrote:
Hi Joe:
  Thanks for your review of the B100G applicability draft. I have taken your
suggestions into account and uploaded v12 of our draft. Please let me know if
any additional edits are needed.

Regards,
radha

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Subject: Opsdir last call review of
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Reviewer: Joe Clarke
Review result: Has Nits

I have been tasked to review this document on behalf of the OPS DIR.  I
wouldn't say I'm an expert in this area, but overall I found the draft easy to
read, and from an operations point of view I appreciate the succinct
applicability summaries, as well as the points to future extensibility work
(though I wonder if those deserve their own section for added clarity).

On the nits side, I notice you compare your Figure 3 with the figure in
Section
3 of RFC7138.  However, you omit the notion of labeling the A, B, etc. with
"OTN Switch", which I think would help.  I'm also not sure what "3R" means
here or in Figure 1 (but that is likely my lack of experience here).  Finally,
the two parts of Figure 3 seem to be showing both one-hop and multi-hop OTUCn
links but you do not call that out as is done in RFC7138.

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