[Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-rsalz-2028bis-05

[David Black via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: David Black
Review result: Ready with Nits

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This draft updates the descriptions of the individuals and organizations
involved in the IETF standards process.  As a process document, it does
not raise any transport-related technical issues, but I did note one overall
concern that needs attention.

Section 2 is written entirely in the singular about individuals, the Document
Editor or Author, the Working Group Chair and the Area Director.  Many IETF
documents have more than one author or editor, and most IETF working groups
have more than one chair - sections 2.1 and 2.2 should be revised and retitled to
reflect that.  Section 2.3 is correctly singular, because it is about the Responsible
Area Director - I recommend changing its title to "The Responsible Area Director".

It would be helpful for Section 3 to note that with the exception of the General
Area, each Area usually has more than one AD.