Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-rsalz-2028bis-05
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From: "Black, David" <David.Black@dell.com>
To: "Salz, Rich" <rsalz@akamai.com>, Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, "Salz,
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-rsalz-2028bis-05
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A smaller change would suffice, e.g.,
OLD
+Except for the General Area, which is chaired by the IETF Chair,
+IETF Areas traditionally have multiple Area Directors.
+
# Key Organizations in the Process {#organizations}
NEW
+Except for the General Area,
+IETF Areas traditionally have multiple Area Directors.
+
# Key Organizations in the Process {#organizations}
Thanks, --David
-----Original Message-----
From: Salz, Rich <rsalz@akamai.com>
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To: Lars Eggert; Salz, Rich
Cc: Black, David; tsv-art@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org; draft-rsalz-2028bis.all@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-rsalz-2028bis-05
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> do we in fact want to mention this here? IIRC nothing would prevent the appointment of a second GEN AD, which could handle just the GEN area but not be a second IETF chair.
Thanks,
Lars
Happy to remove the ugly sentence, rather than appease David if that's what you prefer :)
- [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-rsal… David Black via Datatracker
- Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-… Lars Eggert
- Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-… Salz, Rich
- Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-… Black, David
- Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-… Salz, Rich