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Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> Tue, 28 March 2023 16:00 UTC

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Subject: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document:draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22
Reviewer:Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date:March 28, 2023
IETF LC End Date:April 10, 2023
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:Ready

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
a) I managed to find in this well written document one typo:

Section 6

we would like to
   sincerely apolgized for anyone who we forgot to credit


apologize
b) Lack of an example .alt TLD as indicated in the Artart LC Review. I
wonder if this is due to maybe there will be none.

Behcet

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