Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-19
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From: Keyur Patel <keyur@arrcus.com>
To: Gyan Mishra <hayabusagsm@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-19
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Hi Gyan, Thanks for the detail review of the draft. My comments are inlined #Keyur On 10/2/20, 11:09 PM, "Gyan Mishra via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: Reviewer: Gyan Mishra Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps-?? Reviewer: Gyan Mishra Review Date: 2020-10-02 IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-01 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft updates RFC 5512 is which was never used in production. This document deprecates the original RFC 5512 Encapsulation SAFI used for GRE encapsulation type only and defined extended community attributes (which has never been used in production) , and specifies semantics for the attribute when it is carried in UPDATEs of certain other SAFIs. This document adds support for additional Tunnel Types, and allows a remote tunnel endpoint address to be specified for each tunnel. This document also provides support for specifying fields of any inner or outer encapsulations that may be used by a particular tunnel. This document is well written and clearly defines all the tunnel encapsulation attributes that exist today. This draft modification of the usage of the tunnel encapsulation attribute is backwards compatible so does not impact the existing deployments of the tunnel encapsulation types such as vxlan,vxlan GPE, NVGRE, MPLS over GRE, L2TPV3. Major issues: None Minor issues: Is tunnel type RFC 7510 MPLS over UDP supported. #Keyur: Yes. Please see section 1.4 in the draft version 20 that was recently posted. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-tunnel-encaps/ Also RFC 8663 SR-MPLS over IP for SRv6 and SR-MPLS interoperability where MPLS over GRE RFC 4023 is used or RFC 7510 MPLS over UDP and outer encapsulation is IPv6 for SRv6 forwarding plane to tunnel SR-MPLS. #Keyur: These should be a separate document. __ Nits/editorial comments: As this update is backwards compatible to tunnel encapsulation attributes deployed today is there any code upgrade for vendor implementation required now for router vendors to support the new encapsulation attributes TLV and Sub TLVs and extended community attributes defined with this draft. #Keyur: As you know the tunnel encapsulation attribute itself is backward compatible with RFC5512. However as part of this document, the tunnel encapsulation attribute can be carried with set of AFI/SAFIs that are defined in this document. To make this happen the code upgrade would be needed (Please refer to section 1). Regards, Keyur
- [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf… Gyan Mishra via Datatracker
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Susan Hares
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Keyur Patel
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Gyan Mishra
- Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review… Alissa Cooper