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Re: [Last-Call] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04

Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 28 April 2022 14:48 UTC

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From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 28 Apr 2022 20:18:01 +0530
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To: Matthew Bocci <matthew.bocci@nokia.com>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04
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Hi Matthew,

Thanks for your review and we've fixed all the nits identified by you in
the updated version posted below:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-05

Thanks,
Ketan


On Wed, Apr 27, 2022 at 9:15 PM Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
> Review result: Ready
>
> The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written.
> Thank you!
>
> I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows:
>
> Section 2.2:
> "..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to
> 'through',
> to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting
> diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be
> diverted away..."
>
> Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV
> Please expand 'LLS' on first use.
>
> Section 6 Procedures, first bullet
> "..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to
> "..by
> any of its neighbors on any of its links..."
>
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