Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-uberti-rtcweb-rfc8829bis-02
Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Fri, 30 September 2022 12:47 UTC
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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Fri, 30 Sep 2022 15:47:00 +0300
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-uberti-rtcweb-rfc8829bis-02
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Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2022-3-27, at 20:49, Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-uberti-rtcweb-rfc8829bis-02 > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review Date: 2022-03-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-05 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > However, there are some issues that should be considered before final approval. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > I found myself confused as a reader about one aspect of this document The > document seems to describe both the Interface to the JSEP and the details > of what the underlying system must do in response to JSEP operations. The > later is described very well and clearly. The former is described quite > vaguely. I suspect that the assumption is that the required parameters are > described in the W3C documents. But it is hard to tell, and the only > formal reference is a vague citation in the introduction to an outdated W3C > specification. A little more clarity on how an implementor is supposed to > know what actual interface objects, methods, and parameters they need to > provide would be helpful. Also, the reference should be updated to > whatever is the current W3C specification. > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
- [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-uber… Joel Halpern via Datatracker
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Sean Turner
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review… Cullen Jennings (fluffy)
- Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review… Sean Turner
- Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review… Sean Turner
- Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review… Cullen Jennings
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Lars Eggert