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Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> Wed, 25 May 2022 10:56 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-6834bis-10
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HI Yoshifumi,

Two replies:



> On 23 May 2022, at 11:06, Yoshifumi Nishida <nsd.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>   * Are we allowed to send a new Map-Register message while waiting for
>>     another Map-Register message?
> 
> Map-registers and related operation are defined in https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis/>.
> This document does not modify its functioning. 
> 
> Got it. It might be good if you could mention it in the draft.
>  

Yes, we will add this clarification.

> 
>> 4: Page 6 Section 6:
>>   I am wondering what is the use case for comparing two version numbers.
>>   I might miss something, but it seems to me that we just need to check
>>   whether the version number is the expected one or not.
>>   It might be better to explain the use case for it if there is any.
> 
> That is explained in detail in Section 7. We will add an forward reference to that section.
> 
> Got it. I am thinking that it might be better to explain in which situations you might receive old version numbers or newer version numbers with a gap bigger than 1.

Yes, we can add such clarification.

Thanks

Luigi




> Thanks,
> --
> Yoshi

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