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Thanks for your review, Sean!

We addressed your feedback in version -30 of the draft. Those are useful=
=20
additions!

Ciao
Hannes


Am 13.09.2026 um 03:55 schrieb Sean Turner via Datatracker:
> Document: draft-ietf-lamps-csr-attestation
> Title: Use of Remote Attestation with Certification Signing Requests
> Reviewer: Sean Turner
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I have only two nits:
>
> 1. In Section 6 2nd paragraph, where you refer to the CPS you could add =
an
> informative reference to [RFC3647].
>
> 2. In Section 6.2, where you reference EST and CMP you could also add  C=
MC
> [RFC10002] as [I-D.ietf-lamps-attestation-freshness] also includes proce=
dures
> for CMC.
>
>
