Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06

Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 09 April 2021 11:55 UTC

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Date: Fri, 09 Apr 2021 14:54:55 +0300
From: Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com>
To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@gmail.com>
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We have already addressed the GenArt comments, thank you Suresh!

I will respond to Lars's review separately.

	Yaron

On 4/6/21, 15:52, "Lars Eggert" <lars@eggert.org> wrote:

    Suresh, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document based on my own review.

    Lars


    > On 2021-3-25, at 21:10, Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
    > 
    > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
    > Review result: Ready with Nits
    > 
    > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
    > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
    > by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
    > like any other last call comments.
    > 
    > For more information, please see the FAQ at
    > 
    > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
    > 
    > Document: draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-??
    > Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
    > Review Date: 2021-03-23
    > IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-22
    > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
    > 
    > Summary:
    > 
    > Major issues:
    > 
    > Minor issues:
    > 
    > Nits/editorial comments:
    > 
    > There are a few lines longer than 72 characters and this will fail the ID Nits
    > check. I dug a bit deeper and found out some of these lines were in the CDDL in
    > Appendix B. Here are the lines if that helps.
    > 
    > % awk 'length($0)>72 { print length($0) $0}'
    > draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06.txt 73Intended status: Standards Track
    >                         D. López 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-256, MGF-1 with
    > SHA-256, and a salt length of 32 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-384, MGF-1 with
    > SHA-384, and a salt length of 48 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-512, MGF-1 with
    > SHA-512, and a salt length of 64 bytes
    > 
    > 
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