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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10
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Thanks for the re-review Linda.  

ACME WG: here is the thread from the IETF LC where proposed changes were discussed: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/last-call/nujBgHd6ZKHY6fG58ZWBKzFGVWs/

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Sent: Thursday, October 20, 2022 6:55 PM
> To: ops-dir@ietf.org
> Cc: acme@ietf.org; draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org
> Subject: Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10
> 
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Has Issues
> 
> I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
> other last call comments.
> 
> This document specifies an extension to ACME protocol which allows an ACME
> server to validate the Delay-Tolerant Networking Node ID for an ACME client.
> 
> I had the following comments for the -07 version. I don't think the latest
> version (-10) resolved my comments.
> 
> Issues:
> 
> The document didn't describe how the Node ID described in this document is
> related to the Delay Tolerant Network. I see the mechanism can be equally
> used in any network. What are the specifics related to the "Delay Tolerant
> Network"?
> It would be helpful if the document adds a paragraph explaining the specific
> characteristics of the Delay-Tolerant Network that require the additional
> parameters/types used for validating the Node-ID for an ACME client.
> 
> Thank you,
> 
> Linda Dunbar
>

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