Re: [Lime] WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-00

Support.
A few comments and suggested change to draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-00:
1.s/[lime base model]/ [I-D.ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam]
2. Add a reference to [I-D.ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam in the Normative reference section.
3. Section 3.1
s/ captured under a separate module./captured under a separate module in the future work.
4. Remove " YANG module of OAM "at the end of section
5. Section 5 Security section, proposed text as follows:
"
The YANG modules defined in this memo are designed to be accessed via the NETCONF protocol [RFC6241]. The lowest NETCONF layer is the secure transport layer and the mandatory to implement secure transport is SSH [RFC6242]. The NETCONF access control model [RFC6536] provides the means to restrict access for particular NETCONF users to a pre-configured subset of all available NETCONF protocol operations and content.

Some of the RPC operations in the "ietf-connectionless-oam-methods" YANG module may be considered sensitive or vulnerable in some network environments. It is thus important to control access to these operations. These are the operations and their sensitivity/vulnerability:

o continuity-check: Generates continuity check.
o path-discovery: Generates path discovery.
"
-Qin
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发件人: Lime [mailto:lime-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Ron Bonica
发送时间: 2017年1月26日 23:12
收件人: lime@ietf.org
主题: [Lime] WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-00

Folks,

This message begins a WG Last Call for draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods-00. Please submit your comments by February 9, 2017.

                                                                       Ron

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