Re: [Lime] WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-03

Support and I have a few suggested changes to v-(03).
1. Add reference for Proactive OAM session, I think RFC7276 provides 
 a good references for the term 'proactive activation'.
2. Add reference for active, passive and hybrid OAM, I think RFC7799
provides a good references for active method, passive method and hybrid method
These methods are related to performance measurement, which is part of OAM. Therefore RFC7799 would be a good 
reference for active passive and hybrid OAM.
3.Add informative reference to I-D.ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods.
4. Change [lime retrieval methods] into [I-D.ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-methods].
5. Section 3
OLD TEXT:
"
The level in oam-layers indicate whether related oam test point is
client layer, server layer or same layer.
"
NEW TEXT:
"
The level in oam-layers indicate whether related oam test point is
in client layer(lower layer described in section 3.3), server layer
(upper layer described in section 3.3) or the same layer as the current 
test point under Test point Locations.
"
6. Section 6, complete the empty section as follows:
"
   The YANG module defined in this memo is designed to be accessed via
   the NETCONF protocol [RFC6241] [RFC6241].  The lowest NETCONF layer
   is the secure transport layer and the mandatory-to-implement secure
   transport is SSH [RFC6242] [RFC6242].  The NETCONF access control
   model [RFC6536] [RFC6536] provides the means to restrict access for
   particular NETCONF users to a pre-configured subset of all available
   NETCONF protocol operations and content.

   There are a number of data nodes defined in the YANG module which are
   writable/creatable/deletable (i.e., config true, which is the
   default).  These data nodes may be considered sensitive or vulnerable
   in some network environments.  Write operations (e.g., <edit-config>)
   to these data nodes without proper protection can have a negative
   effect on network operations.

   The vulnerable "config true" subtrees and data nodes are the
   following:

/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:ipv4-location-type/coam:test-point-ipv4-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:ipv6-location-type/coam:test-point-ipv6-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:mac-location-type/coam:test-point-mac-address-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:tunnel-location-type/coam:test-point-tunnel-address-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:ip-prefix-location-type/coam:test-point-ip-prefix-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:route-distinguisher-location-type/coam:test-point-route-dist-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:group-ip-address-location-type/coam:test-point-group-ip-address-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:group-as-number-location-type/coam:test-point-as-number-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:group-lsp-id-location-type/coam:test-point-lsp-id-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/
/nd:networks/nd:network/nd:node/coam:location-type/coam:group-system-id-location-type/coam:test-point-system-info-location-list/coam:test-point-locations/

   Unauthorized access to any of these lists can adversely affect OAM
   management system handling of end-to-end OAM and coordination of OAM
   within underlying network layers. This may lead to inconsistent
   configuration, reporting, and presentation for the OAM mechanisms
   used to manage the network.
"

-Qin
-----邮件原件-----
发件人: Lime [mailto:lime-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Ron Bonica
发送时间: 2017年1月20日 0:12
收件人: lime@ietf.org; draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam.all@ietf.org
主题: [Lime] WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-03

Folks,

This message begins a Working Group Last Call on draft-ietf-lime-yang-connectionless-oam-03. Please submit comments by February 3, 2017.

                                                                            Ron

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