Re: [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07
Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> Mon, 26 February 2018 20:41 UTC
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Date: Mon, 26 Feb 2018 12:40:57 -0800
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Subject: Re: [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07
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> Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. in section 1 "The signal-free mechanism here proposed " should be "The > signal-free mechanism proposed here " 2. in section 2 SSM is Source Specific > Multicast not single source 3. in section 7 bullet 5 "When the the ITR…" Thanks Roni for your comments. Fixed and will be in -08. Dino
- [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp… Roni Even
- Re: [lisp] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-… Dino Farinacci
- Re: [lisp] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of d… Alissa Cooper