Re: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-yang-14.txt

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From: "Alberto Rodriguez Natal (natal)" <natal@cisco.com>
To: tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-yang-14.txt
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Hi Tom,

Thanks for reviewing the draft. 

Following your suggestions, we will include a table in the Introduction with the prefixes for the modules (similar to the table in section 2.3 of RFC8022 for instance). Likewise, we will edit the IANA considerations to include also the prefixes for the modules.

As for 'lcaf' and 'laddr', they are both prefixes for 'ietf-lisp-address-types', maybe we can converge in using 'lispaddr' as the prefix for that module?

Let us know what you think.

Thanks!
Alberto


On 9/10/20, 4:13 AM, "lisp on behalf of tom petch" <lisp-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote:

    I struggle to understand this.  The first thing that
    I want to know is about modules and prefix and I turn to the IANA
    Considerations but it is only half there, the bit about module name and
    prefix is missing. Looking at the modules, there seems to
    be too many prefix; lisp, listitr, lispetr, listmr, lispms - fine but
    what is this lcaf and laddr? why is it not just lispaf or lispt or lisp 
    anything
    so that the user knows what it is?

    Good practice is to have a table early on in the text of all the
    modules, defined and imported, with all the prefix and the document
    where they are defined.  I suggest that you add one.

    Tom Petch

    > ----- Original Message -----
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    > Sent: Wednesday, September 09, 2020 12:53 AM
    > Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-yang-14.txt
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    >>
    >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
    > directories.
    >> This draft is a work item of the Locator/ID Separation Protocol WG of
    > the IETF.
    >>
    >>          Title           : LISP YANG Model
    >>          Authors         : Vina Ermagan
    >>                            Alberto Rodriguez-Natal
    >>                            Florin Coras
    >>                            Carl Moberg
    >>                            Reshad Rahman
    >>                            Albert Cabellos-Aparicio
    >>                            Fabio Maino
    >>          Filename        : draft-ietf-lisp-yang-14.txt
    >>          Pages           : 79
    >>          Date            : 2020-09-08
    >>
    >> Abstract:
    >>     This document describes a YANG data model to use with the
    > Locator/ID
    >>     Separation Protocol (LISP).
    >>
    >>     The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management
    >>     Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
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