Re: [lisp] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-sec-26: (with COMMENT)

Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> Thu, 16 June 2022 07:10 UTC

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From: Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net>
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Subject: Re: [lisp] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-sec-26: (with COMMENT)
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Ciao Francesca,

Thanks you for reading the document.
I’ll ask the authors to include your comments.

Ciao

L.


> On 15 Jun 2022, at 23:59, Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Francesca Palombini has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-lisp-sec-26: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> # ART AD Review of draft-ietf-lisp-sec-26
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> cc @fpalombini
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> Thank you for the work on this document.
> 
> I only have a couple of very minor comments, easy to fix - feel free to take them or leave them.
> 
> Francesca
> 
> ## Comments
> 
> ### DTLS reference
> 
> Please add a reference to RFC 9147 on the first occurrence of DTLS in the text.
> 
> ### + undefined
> 
> Section 6.5:
> ```
>       *  per-msg-key = KDF( nonce + s + PSK[Key ID] )
> ```
> It should be explicitly stated in the text what operations "+" denotes in this specification.
> 
> ## Notes
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