[lisp] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 12 September 2018 16:07 UTC

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Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-??
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2018-09-12
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-27

Summary: Ready with Nits

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 I have a few concerns about wording (e.g. things too hard to understand). I'll
 send a more complete message before the end of the week in the case they are
 not solved in version 17 I didn't read yet.