Re: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-09.txt

"Darrel Lewis (darlewis)" <darlewis@cisco.com> Fri, 14 November 2014 20:19 UTC

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From: "Darrel Lewis (darlewis)" <darlewis@cisco.com>
To: Ronald Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net>
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I suggest that consensus exists for the current text, it certainly seems sufficient to me.

-D
On Nov 14, 2014, at 12:08 PM, Ronald Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net> wrote:

> Albert,
>  
> The new paragraph is better, but not entirely what I was driving at. I will craft some text on the airplane in a few hours.
>  
>                                                                           Ron
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>  
> From: lisp [mailto:lisp-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Albert Cabellos
> Sent: Friday, November 14, 2014 12:46 AM
> To: lisp@ietf.org
> Subject: [lisp] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-09.txt
>  
> Hi all
>  
> -09 fixes English grammar in a paragraph.
>  
> Albert
>  
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> Date: Thu, Nov 13, 2014 at 7:43 PM
> Subject: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-09.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Locator/ID Separation Protocol Working Group of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : An Architectural Introduction to the Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP)
>         Authors         : Albert Cabellos
>                           Damien Saucez
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-09.txt
>         Pages           : 26
>         Date            : 2014-11-13
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes the architecture of the Locator/ID Separation
>    Protocol (LISP), making it easier to read the rest of the LISP
>    specifications and providing a basis for discussion about the details
>    of the LISP protocols.  This document is used for introductory
>    purposes, more details can be found in RFC6830, the protocol
>    specification.
> 
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-09
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-09
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