[lisp] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-12: (with COMMENT)

"Spencer Dawkins" <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 15 February 2016 17:07 UTC

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Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lisp-eid-block-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Could you expand EID as EID Endpoint IDentifier in the document title?

I'm seeing text that's fairly clear, but could use a native English
speaker pass. For example,

   Transition Mechanism:  The existence of a LISP specific EID block may
         prove useful in transition scenarios.  A non-LISP domain would
         ask an allocation in the LISP EID block and use it to deploy
         ^^^ "ask for"? or "request"?
         LISP in its network.  Such allocation will not be announced in
                               ^^^^ "Such an"? or "This"?
         the BGP routing infrastructure (cf., Section 4).  This approach
         will avoid non-LISP domains to fragment their already allocated
                    ^^^ "fragmenting previously allocated non-LISP
address 
                         space in non-LISP domains"?
         non-LISP addressing space, which may lead to BGP routing table
         inflation since it may (rightfully) be announced in the BGP
                                 ^^^^^^^^^^ "correctly"?
         routing infrastructure.