Re: [lisp] Fwd: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-20: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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(a) Desirable, because more security is always more desirable.

But the choices don’t seem to be comparable. Is “Desirable” more important or more mandatory than “Acceptable”? 

I would like better clarification what I’m voting for if I choose “acceptable” instead of “desirable”.

Dino

> On Sep 28, 2018, at 3:38 PM, Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
> 
> As co-chair, I would like to hear from the working group as to whether making LISP-SEC mandatory to Implement (not Mandatory to Use) for LISP6830bis and 6833bis implementations is
> a) desirable
> b) acceptable
> c) undesirable but livable
> d) unacceptable or worse.
> 
> Please, do not just pick a letter.  Include explanation of your opinion.
> This is not a decision the ADs and Authors can make for the working group.
> 
> Yours,
> Joel
> 
> 
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject: Re: Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-20: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
> Date: Fri, 28 Sep 2018 17:03:40 -0500
> From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
> To: Joel M. Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>
> CC: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis@ietf.org, Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net>, lisp-chairs@ietf.org, lisp@ietf.org
> 
> Hi Joel,
> 
> 
> On Wed, Sep 26, 2018 at 11:53:02PM -0400, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
>> Is there text we can add about the scoping that will change your discuss into a series of useful comments?
> 
> I had attempted to structure my Discuss points so that they would either be
> useful comments as is, or rendered moot by a reduced scope.  I guess I can
> try to clarify those below.  (To be clear, reducing the scope is only going
> to move from "has potentially existentially bad problems" to "has
> substantial issues that likely require reengineering to resolve".)
> 
>> If so, Some indication of how you would like that phrased would help us address these.
> 
> I think Ekr's ballot position on 6833bis has a good summary of the
> architecture assumptions that the reduced scope allows us to make.
> In order to have the document be able to plausibly make those claims, it
> looks like we'd need to at least:
> (1) update the Abstract/Introduction to clarify that the EID namespace is
>    only defined within a single administrative domain.
> (2) (optionally, if it makes sense) mention in the introduction that this
>    administrative domain can include transport over other networks in the
>    same way that a VPN would function[*], without requiring cooperation
>    from or interaction with the other networks' administrators
> (3) remove the "global" text from the EID-to-RLOC Database and Map-Cache
>    definitions
> (4) update the EID-Prefix definition to talk about the local site or
>    administrative domain's "address allocation authority"
> (5) Take a look at the EID definition to consider whether references to "on
>    the public Internet" are still valid, and the text about assignment
>    in a hierarchical manner should be revised for the new scope as well.
>    Likewise for EID-internal structure that is "not visible to the global
>    routing system"
> 
> (I stopped skimming and looking for problematic text around section 6)
> 
> [*] Ideally this would be done without using the term "VPN" itself, since
> I'd like to get a movement going to restrict "VPN" to include
> confidentiality (i.e., privacy) protection.  "virtual network" or "overlay
> network" may or may not be good candidate replacement terms.
> 
>> If not, we seem to have a larger problem.
> 
> Well, we appear to have five ADs that are supporting making LISP-SEC a
> normative reference and thus MTI; I don't know if that scale of change
> meets your threshold for a "larger problem".
> 
>> Yours,
>> Joel
>> On 9/26/18 11:44 PM, Benjamin Kaduk wrote:
>> > Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
>> > draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-20: Discuss
>> > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
>> > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
>> > introductory paragraph, however.)
>> > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
>> > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
>> > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis/
>> > > > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> > DISCUSS:
>> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> > > I have grave concerns about the suitability of LISP as a whole, in its
>> > present form, for advancement to the Standards-Track.  While some of my
>> > concerns are not specific to this document, as the core protocol
>> > (data-plane) spec, it seems an appropriate place to attach them to.
>> > > I am told, out of band, that the intended deployment model is no longer to
>> > cover the entire Internet (c.f. the MISSREF-state
>> > draft-ietf-lisp-introduction's "with LISP, the dge of the Internet and the
>> > core can be logically separated and interconnected by LISP-capable
>> > routers", etc.), and that full Internet-scale operation is no longer a
>> > goal.  However, since that does not seem to be reflected in the current
>> > batch of documents up for IESG review, I am forced to ballot on them
>> > "as-is", namely as targetting global Internet deployment.  The requirements
>> > placed on the mapping system are so stringent so as to be arguably
>> > unachievable at Internet-scale, though that arguably has more of an
>> > interaction with the control-plane than the data-plane.  It's still in
>> > scope here, though, as part of the overall description of the protocol
>> > flow.
> 
> (rendered moot by scope reduction)
> 
>> > There are an almost innumerable number of downgrade attacks possible, and
>> > the control-plane and data-plane security mechanisms are not normative
>> > dependencies of the current corpus of documents, and as such are not up for
>> > consideration as mitigating the security concerns with the core documents.
> 
> The downgrade attacks will probably require some further analysis; LISP-SEC
> would protect a lot of the header bits but I think there may be some other
> data flows to be looked at.
> 
>> > Section 3 defines the EID-to-RLOC Datbaase:
>> > >     EID-to-RLOC Database:   The EID-to-RLOC Database is a global
>> >        distributed database that contains all known EID-Prefix-to-RLOC
>> >        mappings.  Each potential ETR typically contains a small piece of
>> >        the database: the EID-to-RLOC mappings for the EID-Prefixes
>> >        "behind" the router.  These map to one of the router's own
>> >        globally visible IP addresses.  Note that there MAY be transient
>> >        conditions when the EID-Prefix for the site and Locator-Set for
>> >        each EID-Prefix may not be the same on all ETRs.  This has no
>> >        negative implications, since a partial set of Locators can be
>> >        used.
>> > > No compelling architecture for a trustworthy global distributed database
>> > has been presented that I've seen so far, and LISP relies heavily on the
>> > mapping system's database for its functionality.  I am concerned that so
>> > many requirements are placed on the mapping system so as to be in effect
>> > unimplementable, in which case it would seem that the architecture as a
>> > whole (that is, for a global Internet-scale system) is not fit for purpose.
> 
> (rendered moot by scope reduction)
> 
>> > Section 4.1's Step (6) only mentions parsing "to check for format
>> > validity".  I think it is appropriate to mention (and refer to) source
>> > authentication checks as well, since bad Map-Reply data can allow all sorts
>> > of attacks to occur.
> 
> (not affected by scope reduction)
> 
>> > There are some fairly subtle ordering requirements between the order of
>> > entries in Map-Reply messages and the Locator-Status-Bits in data-plane
>> > traffic (so that the semantic meaning of the status bits are meaningful),
>> > which is only given a minimal treatment in the control-plane document.  The
>> > need for synchronization in interpreting these bits should be mentioned
>> > more prominently in the data-plane document as well.
> 
> (not affected by scope reduction)
> 
>> > > The usage of the Instance ID does not seem to be adequately covered; from
>> > what I've been able to pick up so far it seems that both source and
>> > destination participants must agree on the meaning of an Instance ID, and
>> > the source and destination EIDs must be in the same Instance.  This does
>> > not seem like it is compatible with Internet scale, especially if there are
>> > only 24 usable bits of Instance ID.
> 
> (not affected by scope reduction)
> 
>> > > There seems to be a lot of intra-site synchronization requirements, notably
>> > with respect to Map-Version consistency, the contents and ordering of
>> > locator sets for EIDs in the site, etc.; the actual hard requirements for
>> > synchronization within a site should be clearly called out, ideally in a
>> > single location.
> 
> (not affected by scope reduction, since ETRs are affected and not just
> Map-Servers)
> 
>> > > The security considerations attempt to defer substantially to the
>> > threat-analysis in RFC 7835, which does not really seem like a complete
>> > threat analysis and does not provide analysis as to what requirements are
>> > placed on the boundaries between the different components of LISP (data
>> > plane, control plane, mapping system, various extensions, etc.).  The
>> > secdir reviewer had some good thoughts in this space.
> 
> (not affected by scope reduction)
> 
>> > > The security considerations throughout the LISP documents place a heavy
>> > focus on the risk of over-claiming for routing EID-prefixes.  This is a
>> > real concern, to be clear, but it should not overshadow the risk of an
>> > attacker who is able to move traffic around at will, strip security
>> > protections, cause denial of service, alter data-plane payloads, etc.
>> > Similarly, this document's security considerations call out denial of
>> > service as a risk from Map-Cache insertion/spoofing, but the risks from an
>> > attacker being able to read and modify the traffic, perhaps even without
>> > detection, seems a much greater threat to me.
> 
> (not affected by scope reduction)
> 
>> > > I am not convinced that this protocol meets the current IETF requirements
>> > for the security properties of Standards-Track Protocols without at least
>> > LISP-SEC as a mandatory-to-implement component, and possibly additional or
>> > stronger requirements.  (I did not do a full analysis of the system in the
>> > presence of those security mechanisms, since that is not what is being
>> > presented for review.)
> 
> (noting that LISP-SEC needs to be MTI and analysis performed under the new
> assumptions)
> 
>> > Having an EID that is associated to user-correlatable devices has severe
>> > privacy considerations, but I could not find this mentioned anywhere in all
>> > of the LISP documents I've read so far.
> 
> (not affected by scope reduction)
> 
> -Benjamin
> 
>> > > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> > COMMENT:
>> > ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> > > I apologize for the somewhat scattered nature of these comments; there are
>> > a lot of them and I was focusing my time more on trying to understand the
>> > broader system, and the intended security posture, so they did not get as
>> > much clean-up as I would have liked.  (Most of my review was performed on the
>> > -18, though I have tried to update to the -20 as relevant.)
>> > > > The instance ID provides for organizational correlation, another privacy
>> > exposure.
>> > > Is there anything different between an "EID-to-RLOC Map-Request" and just a
>> > "Map-Request"?  (Same question for "Map-Reply", too.)
>> > > There's a lot of stuff that seems to work best if there is symmetric
>> > bidirectional traffic, with inline signalling of map version and
>> > reachability changes, though clearly everything is designed to also work
>> > with asymmetric connectivity or unidirectional traffic.  It would be nice
>> > to have a high-level summary in or near the introduction about what kinds
>> > of behavior/performance differences are expected for bidirectional vs.
>> > unidirectional traffic.
>> > > Section 2
>> > > That's not the 8174 boilerplate; it's more than just adding a cite to the
>> > 2119 boilerplate.
>> > > Section 3
>> > > nit: "An address family that pertains to the Data-Plane." is a sentence
>> > fragment.
>> > >     Ingress Tunnel Router (ITR):   An ITR is a router that resides in a
>> >        [...]
>> >        mapping lookup in the destination address field.  Note that this
>> >        destination RLOC MAY be an intermediate, proxy device that has
>> >        better knowledge of the EID-to-RLOC mapping closer to the
>> > > This doesn't seem like a 2119 MAY is necessary, but rather a statement of
>> > fact that may not be known to the encapsulating ITR.
>> > >        Specifically, when a service provider prepends a LISP header for
>> >        Traffic Engineering purposes, the router that does this is also
>> >        regarded as an ITR.  The outer RLOC the ISP ITR uses can be based
>> >        on the outer destination address (the originating ITR's supplied
>> >        RLOC) or the inner destination address (the originating host's
>> >        supplied EID).
>> > > I'm confused here, perhaps in multiple ways.  Are there now *two* LISP
>> > headers on the packet?  Is the "outer RLOC the ISP ITR uses" the source
>> > RLOC or the destination RLOC?
>> > >     Negative Mapping Entry:   A negative mapping entry, also known as a
>> >        negative cache entry, is an EID-to-RLOC entry where an EID-Prefix
>> >        is advertised or stored with no RLOCs.  That is, the Locator-Set
>> >        for the EID-to-RLOC entry is empty or has an encoded Locator count
>> >        of 0.
>> > > Is "empty" a distinct representation from "locator count of zero"?
>> > > Perhaps something of an aside, but the check described for
>> > Route-Returnability is a somewhat weak check, and in some cases could still
>> > be spoofed.  (I don't expect this to surprise anyone, of course, but
>> > perhaps some more qualifiers could be added to the text.)
>> > > Section 4
>> > >     An additional LISP header MAY be prepended to packets by a TE-ITR
>> >     when re-routing of the path for a packet is desired.  A potential
>> >     use-case for this would be an ISP router that needs to perform
>> >     Traffic Engineering for packets flowing through its network.  In such
>> >     a situation, termed "Recursive Tunneling", an ISP transit acts as an
>> >     additional ITR, and the RLOC it uses for the new prepended header
>> >     would be either a TE-ETR within the ISP (along an intra-ISP traffic
>> >     engineered path) or a TE-ETR within another ISP (an inter-ISP traffic
>> >     engineered path, where an agreement to build such a path exists).
>> > > "the RLOC it uses for the new prepnded header", again, this is as the
>> > destination RLOC (vs. source RLOC)?
>> > > Section 4.1
>> > >     o  Map-Replies are sent on the underlying routing system topology
>> >        using the [I-D.ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis] Control-Plane protocol.
>> > > Just to check my understanding: is the "underlying routing system topology"
>> > the same as the "underlay"?
>> > > Is step (3) just describing more of what step (2) says is "not described in
>> > this example"?
>> > > Section 5.3
>> > > The word "nonce" is normally used for something used exactly once.
>> > E.g., with some AEAD algorithms, if the same "nonce" input is used for
>> > different encryptions, the entire security of the system is compromised.
>> > It would be better to refer to this field with a different term, given
>> > that "the same nonce can be used for a period of time when encapsulating to
>> > the same ETR".  "Uniquifier" or "random value" might be reasonable choices.
>> > > Why is there no discussion of the Map-Version or Instance-ID fields
>> > in this section?
>> > > When doing ETR/PETR decapsulation:
>> > >     o  The inner-header 'Time to Live' field (or 'Hop Limit' field, in
>> >        the case of IPv6) SHOULD be copied from the outer-header 'Time to
>> >        Live' field, when the Time to Live value of the outer header is
>> >        less than the Time to Live value of the inner header.  Failing to
>> >        perform this check can cause the Time to Live of the inner header
>> >        to increment across encapsulation/decapsulation cycles.  This
>> >        check is also performed when doing initial encapsulation, when a
>> >        packet comes to an ITR or PITR destined for a LISP site.
>> > > Er, what is "this check" that is also performed for initial encapsulation?
>> > How are there multiple TTL values to compare?
>> > >     o  The inner-header 'Differentiated Services Code Point' (DSCP) field
>> >        (or the 'Traffic Class' field, in the case of IPv6) SHOULD be
>> >        copied from the outer-header DSCP field ('Traffic Class' field, in
>> >        the case of IPv6) to the inner-header.
>> > > nit: the first "inner-header" seems like an editing remnant?
>> > > Section 7.1
>> > > How is this stateless if it invovles knowledge about the routers between
>> > the ITR and all possible ETRs (i.e., a set that could change over time)?
>> > > Section 8
>> > > This 32-bit vs 24-bit thing is pretty hokey for a standards-track
>> > specification (yes, I know that LISP-DDT is not standards track at the
>> > moment).
>> > > Section 9
>> > >     Alternatively, RLOC information MAY be gleaned from received tunneled
>> > > What is this an alternative to?  The list of four options above?
>> > >     packets or EID-to-RLOC Map-Request messages.  A "gleaned" Map-Cache
>> >     entry, one learned from the source RLOC of a received encapsulated
>> >     packet, is only stored and used for a few seconds, pending
>> >     verification.  Verification is performed by sending a Map-Request to
>> >     the source EID (the inner-header IP source address) of the received
>> >     encapsulated packet.
>> > > The source EID is some random end system, right?  So this relys on some
>> > magic in the ETR to detect that there's a Map-Request and reply directly
>> > instead of passing it on to the EID that won't know what to do with it?
>> > > Talking about the "R-bit" of the Map-Reply" is detail from 6833bis and
>> > might benefit from an explicit section reference to the other document.
>> > > Section 10
>> > > What is the "CE" of "CE-based ITRs"?  Presumably Customer Edge, but it
>> > is not marked as well-known at
>> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt so expansion is
>> > probably in order.
>> > > Again, when we are talking about the internal structure of the Map-Reply, a
>> > detailed section refernce to 6833bis is useful.
>> > > Modifying LSBs seems like a fine DoS attack vector for an on-path attacker.
>> > >     value of 1.  Locator-Status-Bits are associated with a Locator-Set
>> >     per EID-Prefix.  Therefore, when a Locator becomes unreachable, the
>> >     Locator-Status-Bit that corresponds to that Locator's position in the
>> >     list returned by the last Map-Reply will be set to zero for that
>> >     particular EID-Prefix
>> > > Doesn't this imply a stateful relationship between the ordering of
>> > Map-Replys and data-plane traffic?
>> > > Section 10.1
>> > >     Note that "ITR" and "ETR" are relative terms here.  Both devices MUST
>> >     be implementing both ITR and ETR functionality for the echo nonce
>> >     mechanism to operate.
>> > > Perhaps they could be given actual names so as to disambiguate which steps
>> > are performed with ITR vs. ETR role?
>> > >     The echo-nonce algorithm is bilateral.  That is, if one side sets the
>> >     E-bit and the other side is not enabled for echo-noncing, then the
>> >     echoing of the nonce does not occur and the requesting side may
>> >     erroneously consider the Locator unreachable.  An ITR SHOULD only set
>> >     the E-bit in an encapsulated data packet when it knows the ETR is
>> >     enabled for echo-noncing.  This is conveyed by the E-bit in the RLOC-
>> >     probe Map-Reply message.
>> > > Why is this even optional?  If it was mandatory to use, then there would
>> > not be a question.  But at least clarify that the "this" that is conveyed
>> > is whether the peer supports the echo-nonce algorithm.  (Also, subject to
>> > downgrade.)
>> > > Section 13
>> > >     When a Locator record is removed from a Locator-Set, ITRs that have
>> >     the mapping cached will not use the removed Locator because the xTRs
>> >     will set the Locator-Status-Bit to 0.  So, even if the Locator is in
>> >     the list, it will not be used.  For new mapping requests, the xTRs
>> >     can set the Locator AFI to 0 (indicating an unspecified address), as
>> >     well as setting the corresponding Locator-Status-Bit to 0.  This
>> >     forces ITRs with old or new mappings to avoid using the removed
>> >     Locator.
>> > > The behavior describe here seems like it would be better described as "when
>> > a Locator is taken out of service" than "removed from a Locator-Set", since
>> > if it is not in the set at all, it has no index, and no LSB or AFI to set.
>> > Should actually depopulating it like this be forbidden?
>> > > I guess the Map Versioning is supposed to help with this, but we need to
>> > nail down the semantics more and/or give a clearer reference to it.
>> > > Section 13.1
>> > >     An ITR, when it encapsulates packets to ETRs, can convey its own Map-
>> >     Version Number.  This is known as the Source Map-Version Number.
>> > > Replacing "its own Map-Version Number" with something like "the Map-Version
>> > numer for the LISP site of which it is a part".  Writing this causes me to
>> > note that the semantics of the Map-Version are unclear, here -- what is it
>> > scoped to?  An EID-Prefix?  An RLOC?  Oh, you say that in the next
>> > paragraph (EID-Prefix).
>> > >     A Map-Version Number can be included in Map-Register messages as
>> >     well.  This is a good way for the Map-Server to assure that all ETRs
>> >     for a site registering to it will be synchronized according to Map-
>> >     Version Number.
>> > > Huh?  I must be confused how this works.  (Also, wouldn't this be better in
>> > the control plane document which covers Map-Register?)
>> > > Section 15
>> > >     o  When a tunnel-encapsulated packet is received by an ETR, the outer
>> >        destination address may not be the address of the router.  This
>> >        makes it challenging for the control plane to get packets from the
>> >        hardware.  This may be mitigated by creating special Forwarding
>> >        Information Base (FIB) entries for the EID-Prefixes of EIDs served
>> >        by the ETR (those for which the router provides an RLOC
>> >        translation).  These FIB entries are marked with a flag indicating
>> >        that Control-Plane processing SHOULD be performed.
>> > > I assume this is just my lack of background showing, but I'm confused how
>> > it makes sense to mark these for control-plane processing.  Isn't the
>> > control plane much slower, and we're not putting all of the LISP data-plane
>> > traffic onto the slow path?
>> > > Section 18
>> > >     o  Data-Plane gleaning for creating map-cache entries has been made
>> >        optional.  If any ITR implementations depend or assume the remote
>> >        ETR is gleaning should not do so.
>> > > nit: this is ungrammatical; "they should not" or "Any ITR implementations
>> > that depend on or assume that" would fix it.
>> > > Section 19.1
>> > > Presumably IANA also updated the reference column to point to this
>> > document?
>> > > > 
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