Re: [lisp] draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-14

Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> Wed, 22 August 2018 07:51 UTC

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From: Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net>
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Subject: Re: [lisp] draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-14
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Hi Dino,

the new section looks good to me. Just one comment: I would avoid use the word “draft” in the first sentence of the last bullet of the section.
So instead of 

"Data-plane gleaning for creating map-cache entries has been made optional in this draft.”

I would simply put:

"Data-plane gleaning for creating map-cache entries has been made optional.”

Just trimming the last part.

Ciao

L.



> On 20 Aug 2018, at 20:42, Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> wrote:
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> <rfcdiff-rfc6830bis.html>