Re: [lisp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13.txt

Hi Alia

Thanks for the rewording, I agree that your suggeted text reads better.

We´ll incorporate this text along with further comments (if any) in a
revised version of the draft.

Regards

Albert

On Tue, Apr 14, 2015 at 9:04 PM, Alia Atlas <akatlas@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Luigi,
>
> In Sec 3.1, as part of the Locator/Identifier Split, it says:
>
> "Locator/Identifier split: By decoupling the overloaded semantics
>       of the current IP addresses the Internet core can be assigned
>       identity meaningful addresses and hence, can use aggregation to
>       scale.  Devices are assigned with relatively opaque topologically
>       meaningful addresses that are independent of their topological
>       location.
> "
>
> This still doesn't make sense!
>
> "Locator/Identifier split:  Decoupling the overloaded semantics of current
> IP addresses allows devices to have identity-based addresses that are
> separate from topologically-meaningful addresses.  By allowing only the
> topologically-meaningful addresses to be exposed to the Internet core,
> those
> topologically-meaningful addresses can be aggregated to support substantial
> scaling.  Individual devices are assigned identity-based addresses that are
> not used for forwarding in the Internet core."
>
> is probably a lot closer to what you are trying to say - but please figure
> out
> what your points are and reread the text to make sure that it parses.
>
> This was in my comment and not the Discuss, so I am clearing that.
>
> Regards,
> Alia
>
> On Tue, Apr 14, 2015 at 6:02 AM, Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> Did you get a chance to have a look to the latest version of this
>> document to consider clearing the open discuss?
>>
>> May be to be added to the next tele chat agenda?
>>
>> ciao
>>
>> Luigi
>>
>>
>> On 02 Apr 2015, at 21:56, Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net> wrote:
>>
>> Hi All,
>>
>> authors submitted a new version of the LISP introduction document
>> addressing all of the discuss and comments previously raised.
>>
>> Please let us know if there is any residual issue.
>>
>> ciao
>>
>> Luigi
>>
>>
>> Begin forwarded message:
>>
>> *From: *internet-drafts@ietf.org
>> *To: *<i-d-announce@ietf.org>
>> *Subject: **I-D Action: draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13.txt*
>> *Date: *2 Apr 2015 14:27:11 CEST
>> *Cc: *lisp@ietf.org
>> *Reply-To: *internet-drafts@ietf.org
>>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Locator/ID Separation Protocol Working
>> Group of the IETF.
>>
>>        Title           : An Architectural Introduction to the Locator/ID
>> Separation Protocol (LISP)
>>        Authors         : Albert Cabellos
>>                          Damien Saucez
>> Filename        : draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13.txt
>> Pages           : 27
>> Date            : 2015-04-02
>>
>> Abstract:
>>   This document describes the architecture of the Locator/ID Separation
>>   Protocol (LISP), making it easier to read the rest of the LISP
>>   specifications and providing a basis for discussion about the details
>>   of the LISP protocols.  This document is used for introductory
>>   purposes, more details can be found in RFC6830, the protocol
>>   specification.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction/
>>
>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-13
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