[lisp] Re: Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-name-encoding-11: (with COMMENT)

[Dino Farinacci <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for youre review Mahesh. 

> On Aug 6, 2024, at 4:49 PM, Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Section 9.1, paragraph 2
>> hat plan to switch to using a reliable transport to hold registrations first
>>                            ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply
> "reliable transport".
> 
> Section 9.2, paragraph 1
>> m is distributed, the ETR requires to have one specific mapping ready to be r
>>                                   ^^^^^^^
> Did you mean "having"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice,
> "require" + "to" takes an object, usually a pronoun.
> 
> Section 9.2, paragraph 1
>> hat they can switch to using a reliable transport. This can also lead to gene
>>                             ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply
> "reliable transport".
> 
> Section 9.2, paragraph 4
>> unnel Router (RTRs) as they appear in an locator-set. 9.4. DNs for Self-Docu
>>                                      ^^
> Use "a" instead of "an" if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound,
> e.g. "a sentence", "a university".

I will fix all of the above.

Thanks,
Dino