[lisp] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-sec-28: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 01 July 2022 17:35 UTC

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Subject: [lisp] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-sec-28: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lisp-sec-28: No Objection

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Thanks for dealing with my IANA-related DISCUSS issues.

I concur with John; this was generally well-done and easy to understand.  Nice
work.  A couple of suggestions:

In Section 6.1 has:

   E: ETR-Cant-Sign bit.  This bit is set to 1 to signal ...

I think you mean "If this bit is set to 1, it signals ..." or something
similar.  Taken literally, the current text means you always set it to 1, but I
don't think that's what you meant to say.

I think the fifth paragraph of Section 6.4 is missing a period or something.  I
found it hard to parse toward the end.