Re: [lisp] Fwd: Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16: (with COMMENT)

On September 11, 2018 at 9:50:29 AM, Joel M. Halpern (jmh@joelhalpern.com)
wrote:

Hi!

Any change to lisp-intro should be done by discussion with the RFC
Editor, as it is in the RFC Editor queue (pending reference completion).
If the working group considers it acceptable, we could easily ask them
to change the references to 6830 and 6833 to the bis documents (after
all, it is alreay blocked by documents which depend upon those.)

The reference would still be circular: rfc6830bis would point at
lisp-introduction for architecture details, and that would point back here.

If lisp-introduction was just that (an introduction) and the details were
in rfc6830 to start with…. Maybe the easy fix is to just not point to
lisp-introduction from rfc6830bis, because the details should be here (and
rfc6833bis) already.

s/Finally, [I-D.ietf-lisp-introduction] describes the LISP architecture.//

Alvaro.

Yours,
Joel

On 9/10/18 11:27 PM, Dino Farinacci wrote:
> If you guys have source for the intro doc, I could point it to bis
> documents?
>
> Dino
>
>
> Begin forwarded message:
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>> *Resent-From:* <alias-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:alias-bounces@ietf.org>>
>> *From:* Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com
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>> *Date:* September 10, 2018 at 2:22:21 PM PDT
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>> *Subject:* *Alvaro Retana's No Objection on
>> draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16: (with COMMENT)*
>>
>> Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-16: No Objection
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>> COMMENT:
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>>
>> Thanks for the work on this document!
>>
>> I have some relatively minor comments/nits:
>>
>> (1) §18: s/RFC8060/RFC8061
>>
>> (2) §1: "Finally, [I-D.ietf-lisp-introduction] describes the LISP
>> architecture."  First of all, it would seem to me that the
>> Architecture should
>> be a Normative reference...but I-D.ietf-lisp-introduction says that it
>> "is used
>> for introductory purposes, more details can be found in RFC6830, the
>> protocol
>> specification."  This document obsoletes rfc6830...so it seems to me
>> that there
>> is a failed circular dependency.
>>
>> (3) References to rfc2119/rfc8174 and rfc8126 should be Normative.
>>
>>

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